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Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:08 pm
by Phe0n1x
OK! So I finally got around to making my characters.

Private Second-Class Hector "Hellfire" Constantine (HO): http://bhotr.com/databank/doku.php?id=c ... onstantine
Airman Second-Class Percival Damocles: http://bhotr.com/databank/doku.php?id=c ... l_damocles

Re: Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:50 am
by Kai
Percival looks good, aside from a typo or two that it's too late for me to bother you with.

Hector, however, doesn't seem to have any real link to the drathonians- How was he affected by the great betrayal? Was he on earth? Was the colony he lived on destroyed? What happened to his life 14 years ago?

Re: Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:40 am
by Phe0n1x
Roger, will update. PS: there's quite a bit of backstory stuff (like planets) that haven't been moved over yet.

Re: Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:37 pm
by Mr. Blackbird Lore
Phe0n1x wrote:Roger, will update. PS: there's quite a bit of backstory stuff (like planets) that haven't been moved over yet.
FIX'D. Like a boss.
I like both characters... I still think Percival could use some fleshing out, but I think he's ready to be played. Hector... Oh, Hector. He and Garrett shall be such great friends.

Re: Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:18 pm
by Kai
The updates look pretty good to me. I think you've satisfied my complaints.

You got any, BlackBird?

Re: Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:55 pm
by Mr. Blackbird Lore
Tex, you have a green light. Let's get you introduced.

Re: Hector "Hellfire" Constantine and Percival Damocles

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:57 pm
by Phe0n1x
:D